We have all started a year based on a project tied to the prompt, “What did you do this summer?” I had my students reflect on their favorite 4 venues, including something they visited this past summer, and search through unreasonable 1-star reviews. I told them if it sounded like it was written by a spoiled child, it was probably a good one to collect. My worksheet can be downloaded here.
I then introduced them to the work of Amber Share, www.ambersharedesign.com .
| unreasonable review worksheet |
1. The text is a dynamic art element in the illustration & has shadows.
2. She incorporates a strong use of analogous colors.
3. The artist creates space with foreground, middle-ground, background, and overlap.
We agreed that these were three things that we too could do. We shared our reviews with our peers and discussed which of our 4 venues and reviews would make for the best illustration. We also edited the text to be short and snappy. This might mean clipping the text to one particular line, or using an ellipsis to join two good parts. We also discussed the importance of avoiding bullying like if a review called out someone by name or disparaged their physical appearance. We also set aside anything that might not be school appropriate. For some teachers this might mean certain language, but I allowed my high school students to substitute cartoon lettering like #@&% for a single curse word they might encounter.
Students started with small sketches in their workbooks. If they needed a second, they used copy paper I had available. They were to create a layered image that showed depth, and incorporate block lettering as if it was another visual element. I have THIS short video to help them do that. I worked at the same time on a sample based on a restaurant I visit called Bojangles, famous for their fried chicken and biscuits. The review I found said “Too greasy… very limited grilled chicken options.”
- Use of a ruler or compass
- Use of perspective in their image
- Detailed textures or patterns
- Richly layered colors
- Inclusion of fairly detailed hands or faces
For more about my grading method, visit THIS blog post.
I contacted Amber Share through her website and let her know what we were up to and she was excited to know her work was inspiring my students. We were excited to learn she is about to launch her new book, Subpar Planet!
I always include literacy connections in my lessons, so every student displayed some written reflections next to their work answering these two questions:
1. What was unreasonable about the review?
2. What kind advice could you leave the writer of the review?
I’ll leave you with these images of student work and our resources.































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